I'm so happy you're back!
This wasn't bad at all, you have good flow, unlike me xD
Good job

*Squeeeel~!*
Elenath-sama~!! Just kidding xD
Thanks for still knowing little me!
Hahah ^^ Thanks! Eventhough.. I like my older ones better
Anyways thankies for the comment.. and so soon! x3 Makes me feel wuvved =3

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Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them.. and you have their shoes...

Believe me, when it comes to commenting, I'm very lazy and.. special.
When I see something I don't care or have interest in, I don't say a word-- but I will always love your stuff!
Keep it up!

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Oooh.. *feels special* Thankies!!
Also a big thanks for saying you liked my work, that's very motivating!
I will~! **

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Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them.. and you have their shoes...

I'm no poetisist -see what I mean?- So I can't break this poem up for analysing. *scribbles out the 'Advanced Critique Encouraged' sign* Hmph.

Now that thats outta the way, I'm so glad to see you again! ^-^

Although I'm sure theres a more deeper and rich meaning behind these words, I'm knocked off my feet by the boldness of the words which starts each paragraph off.

To be honest, I was looking forward to another picture from you ;___; but maybe next time ^0^ Anyway, they say a pictures worth a thousand words, but without words, where would we be?

Glad to see you back in the biz, bro.

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... Missing you all!! >___<

Hahahaa XD No need to critisize it if you don't wanna or can't ^_____^
Getting comments are always a joy

Hahahaha XD Myeaaah.. My poems are weird.. XD I don't follow any rules except for my own. Go freestyler~!

Heehee, just you wait I gotta practice quite a lot. I haven't drawn in a while T-T
So I'll practice a bit and start posting again =3

I've never been in the biz~! You've been~! I'm a sideline supporter

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Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them.. and you have their shoes...

I'm going to make an educated guess: Is this poem about shattered dreams, and a consequent suicide?

Even if I'm completely off, here's what I think of this poem.

1) The words are evocative. (In English, this means that I think that your style is creating exactly that depressed feel that you intended)

2) You repeat yourself, but instead of it sounding redundant, it actually solidifies the subject matter. Congrats for that... few people can do that effectively.

3) It doesn't seem like you tried to get an exact meter to your lines, but they have the natural rythym so horribly absent from most modern poetry. Again, congratulations.

Basically, I really like it. Although I'm more of a ballad and romance poet, I still like to consider subjects more sinister occasionally.

I might humbly suggest that you might be interested in my poem gallery. Any feedback or critique (regardless of what the critique tab says) is welcome.

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How much Norris could Chuck Norris chuck if Chuck Norris could chuck Norris?

Oh my.. first of all: Thank you very much for this awesome comment. I'm honoured to get such a long and serious comment =3 Makes me happy, thanks!

And your guess was right on target ^^ *thumbs up*

1) Whoa.. I thought my English vocabulary pretty much sucked. But this is sure a big boost for my confidence in my English~!

2) Hmmm, that's a very interesting thing to say, I never thought repeating yourself in a poem could be that easily bad for the poem itself. Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind. And thank you, it was quite hard to find a good way to repeat myself.

3) I'm a total amateur when it comes to poems, so I can't get those meters in my poems. I usually just write my poems with feeling and try to make it look good and sound nice when reading it out loud. That's probably that natural rythym your referring to, but writing poems really is hard, so it might be a good idea to start studying those meters. Anyway what Im trying to say is that I write my poems while moving myself into some kind of feeling and try to imagine how things would be.

Once again, thank you very much. I really really appreciate this.
I'll make sure to browse through your poem gallery, it's the least I can do to repay your help. But Im an amateur so it'll probably be just comments on the feel of the poem ^^

I learned quite a lot, so for the last time: Thanks!

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Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them.. and you have their shoes...

Oh? Well then, I'm the supporter for the side line supporter who's supporting me supporting you!

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Good to see you again.

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... Missing you all!! >___<